Very well written, and interesting content. I like your main character quite a bit, and I feel sorry for her as well. Is there going to be more? Just curious.SillygoosePS: if you have time, would you check out my stories?

ACK, Mia, I'm so sorry for this *very* late review.
Anyway.
This is really good, it had a nice flow to it and it kept my attention all the way through. That's such a problem for me when I read fics. I liked the reference to the sun, also. Vivid imagery. Everything just unraveled itself the more I read. All in all, I loved the moral you presented, and how you presented it; like an old woman looking back on her life. Great work!