Jon - *smiles*
I think you know by now that I'm terrible with Constructive Criticism, so I won't even try to bother you with it. Not that it is needed, but alright.
These three sentences-
You love no-one else still.
You love not what might be,
You love only me.
-especially caught my attention, because they are very well-written and eloquent and I love 'em. ^_~
-Rachel.

You may have noticed by now that I'm somewhat picky and even more judgemental with poetry... Apologies. This one is cute, too. I don't like it as much as the middle two, but I do like it. The entrance is nice, as well as the first half of the fifth stanza. Hate to say it again, but poetry punctuation... it does make a difference sometimes. Also, though I loved the entrance, it starts off like something that should rhyme or at least continue after the "I feel found, my mind released" line, but it doesn't. Just a thought. Still, very nice. Good job.
Kudos and daisies.
-Jess

Hey Jon, 'tis Carrie.
It's a nice, short poem,and for the subject of it, I'm sure very sweet.

*swoons* wow another wow. This one is the best one I've read yet. It's so touching *tear*
I dunno why (maybe cause I'm a teen who is into vampyres) but this oddly reminds me of a love bond between human and non-human.