Hey Jon, it's Riss! I love your poetry, it's so beautiful. ^_^ *adds to fav.s*

"Our souls meet, across the void of time./Our bodies, dead. Our minds alive." I love those lines.
I love the overall effect of this poem, and it's just... hard to find a word for it, but I like it. But, again, punctuation could really help to make a better effect, as well as breaking away from the four-line stanzas that you've been sticking to. The whole thing is great, but it was also a little awkward to read parts that rhymed while the rest was more free-verse. Still, poet's choice, and you did a nice bit of work here.
Kudos and daisies.
-Jess

Wow, that's all I'm stuck at... this is brilliant I must say... it has a nice feel and moral(if I can call it that) lends a nice warmth to it.
Wonderful *Nod*
hope to see more.