I'll read/review your stories later... Right now, I'm just looking at the poetry because I really shouldn't be doing anything but studying right now, anyway, but shh.
This one is sweet/cute. The third stanza is definitely the strongest stanza with a nice use of repetition and just a general nice effect when you're done with it. It would be nice to get a little more from the poem than one does, but it's sweet and, as I said, has a nice "Aww" effect when you're done reading it. Perhaps your use of punctuation is purely opinionated, but sometimes it seemed that commas instead of periods or neither in certain places would have worked the poem more to your advantage as the writer and your effect on the reader. Still, sweet poem. Good job!
Kudos and daisies.
-Jess

Aw...I love this one.
The third stanza especially, I think. A great title too.
Would be very nice to be able to write this way.
Carrie

Great poem Jon!

I usually don't like Love poems, because they depress me, and especially since my New Year's Resolution is... Well, you don't really need to know, it'll make me sound dumb...
OOps, I forgot this was supposed to be about reviewing, not my mindless rambles. SO as I was saying, I don't really like love poems, but when they're beautifully written like this one...I can't help but...Aw! It's a wonderful poem, Jon!
- Mel