   sussurus 2004-01-08 . chapter 1Mildly amusing, yes. Nice rhyming. |
 Karin Gordon 2004-01-07 . chapter 1Heh Heh, that last line made me laugh. It's good I liked it, nice rhyme! |
 Infinite Smiles 2003-12-23 . chapter 1Quite funny. I like the idea. Very creative. |
 Children of the Root 2003-12-19 . chapter 1lol. quite funny! |
 Keep it 100 2003-12-19 . chapter 1Heh. That was a good one.
~Heart of the Sword |
 Toondra 2003-12-16 . chapter 1hey...this is a really good poem. I like this kind of stuff...however i can't write it...you should check out my stuff if you have the time.. :) |
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