at first i thought oh god its not going to be as good but after reading the second chapter again i thought no its goin to be good.
im so glad u decided to rewrite, thanks. So what happened to all the old chapters then?
~DK~

no im going to cry please carry it on or at least take out the competition and make a great story with this cos i will miss it otherwise

i know how you feel... but oh no! hopefully it'll work out later... *sniffle* it was one of my favorite stories

'Roger tried to think of all the things he could get Xavier. He could always get her a bouquet of flowers'

wow ive sat and read all 13 chapters without stopping, its a great story nice to see that people do write about gay characters, the contest thing could really add to the story if u continue with the story but if intuition serves me dont let xavier get with o'ryan and leave roger i like roger, he seems almost like the ideal boyfriend to have
~DK~

well, you could always change the summary... i dunno whatever... i still like it!

I liked it better with the characters from before. I don't know the band you're describing, and I personally am not able to follow it as well. It is a good story though.

I liked the stuff before the contest better, but that's just my opinion. I think you should writie it however you want. If someone doesn't like the contest part but likes the story in general, they shouldn't stop reading. I know I would continue reading it.

hey i found this story a little while ago and it's good so far. I definitely think you should keep the contest-that's what drew me to it, since it was in the summary. I was thrown off by the Roger-thing and got confused when he got with him. Anyways, you should keep the contest story line, but not because I said so or because other people said not to, but because it is YOUR story and YOU are the writer. You should write for you and not just so people will enjoy it. If you write what you want to write and write it from the heart, people will enjoy it.

I LIKED IT BETTER WITHOUT THE CONTEST, EITHER WAY.

I like the contest part of the story too, but the story is just moving so slow! I think you should pick up the pace of the story just a bit. Otherwise I love it! Keep going!

you know what i think... no contest

Great chapter! Love the story!

hmm... i still liked it better without the contest thing

hmm... i'm not sure how much i like the whole contest thing... i think the story would have been complete without it, but whatever... i'll still read along