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| Knightmage 2007-04-28 ch 31,  | abusewow,wow,wow. u know those movies where it finishes and ur like waiting for more? this is ur story plus me. i mean, wow. like, wow. well, i don't have anymore words, im speechless. wow.wow.wow.wow. Knightmage |
| Knightmage 2007-04-27 ch 7, | abusedude, how do you keep track with everyone?? you must have a good brain cos i had to read that chapter two times to register who was who keep up the good work!! Knightmage:) |
| Promiscuous Geek 2006-07-13 ch 30, | abuseI love this story so much! I remember reading this on writing.com years ago. I've remembered this story this whole time and I LOVE it. Great characterization, plot and just a brilliant story. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story so much. ^^ Great great piece of writing. You, are an awesome author. ^^ |
| Shaking Leaf 2004-07-07 ch 31, | abusewah already the end? so sad (that's it's the end) and so good and i was wrong..stupid flu, coming up out of nowhere..gr...grr spy boy...yay jacob! yay pretty flowery garden!...ok. there is no good way to end this stupid review...it was good, yummy and absolutely delicious...i didn't do any of my hw (summer school)...you should feel honored... |
| Shaking Leaf 2004-07-07 ch 30, | abusepimples? on our dear beloved princess? and the beginnings of PMS is seems? (i haven't read the next chapter, but her being all grumpy and pissy sounds like it, though 16 is kinda late [i think...unless you're going with the whole medieval thing b/c they were later then too]...point for realism! hahaha...and yay Adam and Jacob are back! |
| Shaking Leaf 2004-07-07 ch 25, | abuseum...your chapter 25 seems exactly like chp 24...um it ends the same way too...observant? or am i just plain too complaining much (whoa bad grammar;; what happened to the order there?) |
| Shaking Leaf 2004-07-07 ch 20, | abusehaha...are the 'horse grooming' fundraisers like carwashes that we do? hahaha...cute and clever |
| Shaking Leaf 2004-07-07 ch 7, | abusetoo many families, relations, in laws, aunts uncles cousins nieces brothers siblings familes. how DO you keep track of them all? my goodness... |
| Shaking Leaf 2004-07-07 ch 5, | abusestory...so...good...can't breathe because i'm hyperventilating about how good it is...ahh..aghh..argh... so logically and well written! logical as in like the characters act like real human beings, not those fairytale perfect hero/princess whose all noble and nice and pretty and gravy, but crybabys and meanie brothers and selfish impulses...good...ah...argh why can't i write like youse? arghghg |
| Shaking Leaf 2004-07-07 ch 1, | abuseooh, i like all the details in your story!! not like the tedious kind where you describe EVERY SINGLE THING EVERY SINGLE PERSON is wearing, but the other kind like the song about the witch, and the king's death, and the curse story...explains why she lived so poorly all this time and such...nice...you managed to balance it very effectively! |
| chineezchoptix 2004-03-07 ch 8, | abusegreat story~ |
| chineezchoptix 2004-03-07 ch 31, | abusewow! this story is SO good!! i can't believe why you only have ONE review! |
| AgentAlexae 2004-02-21 ch 1, | abuseah omg! i remember this story back when you first published it like two years ago! and you left it unfinished!! every now and then when i have had nothing to read i would put "princess chronicles" in the search thingy but nothing ever came up and then omg i just did it now and it came up! and its finished!! you dont even know how excited i am to see this story! i'm going to read the whole thing over from the beginning! ah ok i'm gonna go read now. |