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| Seeker of the Way 2004-01-23 ch 2, | You have an easy way of telling this story. It reminds me of early Dickens. so sad! I hope you think of more thinga to tell!! |
| Seeker of the Way 2004-01-23 ch 1, | Cool! A lot of my stuff just ... comes to me too! I have found it hard reviewing each chapter. I think stories should be seen as a whole. So, you don't mind, I will be going to the next chapter. Thanks again for including an entire story of mine in your profile! That is really nice of you, a real honor! |
| Lady Lunara 2003-12-20 ch 2, | Wow harsh sounds kinda like a jail for kids like a new kinda albatros or somthing. Cool keep it up. ~Lady Lunara~ |
| Lady Lunara 2003-12-20 ch 1, | Hey there, I like where this is going, keep it up. ~Lady Lunara~ |
| Trapped-Bird 2003-12-20 ch 2, | GR SPACING! WON'T WORK! *Tears of Frustration* AH |
| RD 2003-12-16 ch 1, | Interesting, I'd like to see where this leads up to. |
| leen02x 2003-12-16 ch 1, | ~*~*~*flames will be used to roast marshmallows? i have no idea what you mean. Anyway, the story was good, much better than any other dream I had. last night i had a dream that I was kissing my boyfriend and then fell over and started bouncing off of walls... thought that this might be interesting/funny. whatever you think will do. lol, bye!*~*~*~ |
| Trapped-Bird 2003-12-16 ch 1, | AUTHOR'S NOTE: Sorry about the last paragraph being so jumbled, I promise to fix it when I have the time |