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| Joey7691 2004-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really cool, like all your work. I love it and am adding it to my favourites like every other piece of yours I have read. |
| Bubblewrapped 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abuseAnother great poem...again, it could be a portrait of me. In the line "And I guess that’s what I’ll always be" though, I felt it might be more effective to alter it to "I guess thats what I always will be", to be more in keeping with the meter. But thats just me. A really enjoyable read. Keep writing! |
| Angelina Madeline Hidalgo 2004-01-29 ch 1, | abuseamen, amen, amen. i am not the only one! i think you do have talent, by the way--give yourself more credit. :) good poem. |
| Rosenholz 2004-01-23 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem, in particular the last two stanzas. Well done. |
| ParisianLoft 2004-01-02 ch 1, | abuseHey, good job. Very poignant, and you capture the wallflower perfectly. Hey, I was one to! So, I know how it is. Great poem! |
| Flotom 2003-12-18 ch 1, | abuseWow, I loved this. It's so true. |
| Fleta 2003-12-16 ch 1, | abuseTwo things: 1) read one of my favorite books, "The Perks of Being a Wallflower" by Stephan Chbosky. 2) see what the name of my email adress is. ^_^ |