 poetic abortion 2005-03-15 . chapter 4;^; Wow, frightening and creepy is the only way to describe this series. Excellantly written and done so well. ^-^ Keep it up!! *adds you to AuthorAlert*
!~* Noelle *~! |
 incandescent.smiles 2005-03-03 . chapter 10*stares* this is just... wow. great job, it's wonderful. especially the one about "Laura"... this really makes me think.
~leila* |
 ElectricHeart9 2004-12-05 . chapter 8I liked this piece. Not too much detail, just enough to get the feel of the surroundings and what not. Nice work :) |
 poetic abortion 2004-11-07 . chapter 3This is depressing. These are well written and very good. Maybe you could go more indept and tell us why their all commiting suicide ? I like this by the way.
~ Noelle ~ |
 write thing 2004-08-11 . chapter 3you could turn this into 3 separate stories - but the last 1, was she meant to die or was it a mistake hmm |
 Scarlet 2004-02-25 . chapter 3 i just don't know what to say . . . these "stories" you seem to capture the feeling but why are the ykilling themselves i want to know more |
 candice 2004-02-23 . chapter 3 wow...liz...that was really depressing but amazing all at the same time...especially the last one...Laura...it makes u think...did she really want 2 kill herself or did shejust want 2 feel in control of her life 4 once...in control of weather 2 live or weather 2 die...it makes me think...it makes me appreciate life alot more now that i read that...wow...
luv ya liz
candice |
 Lady Sunlight 2004-02-21 . chapter 3Me likey! |
 Darkest Witch 2004-02-21 . chapter 3 Great job...i like it. |
 SiempreSK 2004-01-09 . chapter 1-blinkith- Wow. ... Just wow. So captivating and realistic; slightly reminds me of a deceased friend of mine.
Anyways, it's really powerful and moving at the same time. Excellent work. |