I liked this story...short but has a point. Good luck God bless!

FINALLY after so long, I've (finally) been able to have the computer for myself ^_^ and got the chance to review! I read it long ago...but now it's the time to tell you I LIKE it! (Is it odd if I say that I found it a bit funny?)
Anyways...good one! *thumbs up*

WOW! Really well written story... really dramatic too. I'm glad Jackie got away from him. Guys can be such creeps sometimes. I look forward to reading more of your stories. :)

that was really good/intruiging! i really got into it and started hating Peter hehe..do you ever watch movies/shows or read books and you're thinking "NO!! don't do it!!"

First of all, thank you for reviewing my story "Stop You" (i'll use your advice although I think thats going to be the end of the story) I really liked this story, the chapters were short and it didn't take long to read them. The main character was a likeable (and believable) person. I normally love super-short stories that take no time to read, but I would have liked it more if you had elaborated at some parts. *sprays air freshener at 70 sumthin year old Peter* No old smelly men living in China will come to my door!

This is a really awesome story. I'm just thirteen and compared to your stories it seems like we're seven years apart. You can write so good and i understand how you get in the middle of a story and lose interest. The story Im writing called The Burning is a really good story in my mind but sometimes I'm like, why bother? I love how Jackie screamed at Peter in the hospital. Boys can be such dorks sometimes. Anyway, great story. Hope you write more stories! I'd love to read them

Hey, you should read my story And my Bottom Lip Trembles...the story. You'd like it I think. Thanx for ur review. I like the story, was a bit quick, but still good.

This is a really awesome story and it catches your attention

hey, this was a really good story. it had a nice ending and a good message. keep up the good work :)

Aw, it's over...well good story anyway. I'm glad Jackie got rid of Peter. Keep writing.
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Young'n'HopelessKid

Hey, good ending!

geeze intense but oh so good heh keep writing i love it..Fate

Good chapter, continue!

This is pretty good, I like it so far. Wonder what happens next? I hope she isn't just gonna let him beat her up again...
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Young'n'HopelessKid

Wow, Peter's such a jerk! This is very good, keep going.