I think pain is the soul of poetry; you capture that very well in this poem. Additionally, you allow for a great number of people to connect with your emotions because guilt is an emotion that many people experience. Good work.

-[Chaotic0ne]

It's so true. It's a sick cycle of hurt feelings, revenge and anger. I like how you capitalized important parts. (Why Do I Care?, I Feel Guilty)I like the rhetorical questions throughout, it helps to show the fractured feelings of someone confused. It's a great poem. :)

this is beautifully written. it is really powerful... i completely understand where u are coming from and can relate to it. i don't have any comments on how to improve u because i think it is perfect the way it is... YOU ARE SO TALENTED! :-)

The poem is very deep and emotional. It makes me feel.. how do I put this.. in touch with your feelings when you wrote this. The style of it just takes the reader along. I like the rhetorical questions too. They involve the reader and also show how you are seriously thinking. Good job! ::smile::