I like how you used thine and thy...very old school...Good poem, great theme.

This is true...sometimes we are our own enemies!

/ \ Sorry, this is suppose to b picture of my "jaw dropping".
I supose I should quarantine
my creative impulses to my
(-) writing and the bedroom (haha
sorry, I couldn't help myself).
Oh God - now you'll think I am
some kind of loser freak!
\_/ HAHA! Holiday stress is fun!
Seriously, tho; this poem DOES mean a lot to me. I am always fighting my self. I am my own worse enemy. Also, I give others the weapons to use against me to show them I am worth knowing. My vulnerability is supposed to let them know they can always trust me an TALK TO me! I am a good guy, but I do have my fears and doubts.
Hope this made you smile!