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| xoxokristen 2008-10-14 ch 42,   | Excellent story- i am going to fail my midterm because i couldn't stop reading it (jk, i won't fail, don't worry). Please update again soon, i want to know more about eien and cherry! |
| daling 2008-08-24 ch 42, | god please update babe. x)) but personally, i hate it when kreed flirts with peaches. but thats because i love apples. hahaha. neway,, update okay. ;DD |
| Morgan Davis 2008-08-18 ch 42, | OMG! if you could finish this in a month that would be so awesome! don't get me wrong, i love this story! but i want to know what happens! it is killing me! and dude! i have been waiting, like, what? three? four years? lol hurry and post more! |
| evilcleo 2008-08-18 ch 42, | Great update. It really made my day. |
| atreyu love 2008-08-18 ch 42, | love what kreed was saying about dying and living (apples wedding etc.) haha. but its sad for Cherry and Chase. i do hope they end up happy and together!! PLEASE UPDATE! |
| RunFree 2008-07-02 ch 41, | Great story plz update soon... |
| atreyu love 2008-05-17 ch 41, | OMG. I was so psyched to read the whole story today.. and then i get to this chapter and the story wasnt complete! lol i can not WAIT for you to update! i am absolutely in LOVE with this story :) PLEASE UPDATE! and i hope she doesnt die, i love Chase and her too much for that to happen! |
| atreyu love 2008-05-17 ch 34, | this is so intense. i cant stop reading it! |
| atreyu love 2008-05-17 ch 33, | OMG THAT WAS SHOCKING! shes not going to die... |
| atreyu love 2008-05-17 ch 24, | haha. i love how all the young teenage girls who are the love "targets" i guess you could say all have fruits for names :) its cute!! lol |
| atreyu love 2008-05-17 ch 23, | i absolutely love Kreed and Apples :) |
| atreyu love 2008-05-17 ch 8, | aww. i knew he was going to take her with him.. but then hes going to act mean to her XD |
| atreyu love 2008-05-17 ch 6, | if kreed makes it out alive, will he take apples? :) |
| atreyu love 2008-05-17 ch 1, | i like it alot!! |
| jlr 2008-04-16 ch 41, | I liked the chapter, but I felt like I was waiting for it to end so that I could get to the next chapter. I can't find the right words to explain it (hopefully without offending you) but I felt like while all of this set up was nice, it was also kind of unnecessary. It's the kind of thing that you put after the climax. By putting all of this sorting out here you're losing momentum. Maybe not though, because I am still excited. I don't think that this was very helpful. Either way, update soon. ~jlr |