Hell yea. That poem is excellent. Great job.
If you don't mind... could you read some of my stuff. (pwease *makes puppy dog face*)

wow.i know how you feel.i tried to write all about it (note:TRIED).if you have time could you pls r&r insane, can't forget and no.i don't think so.? it's about this .

wow...i went thru a similar experience and i know what it feels like...you really expressed it well on paper. good job..i like this poem a lot. :-)

I know how you feel. Nice job.

I love this poem its really good and flows well (even though i dont care for short poems a whole lot i like it) please check out some of mine im new on the sight thanx ba bye

omg i love this i know how you feel!

lol great poem. Totaly know were you're coming from same thing happened to me.