Wow, awesome tutorial. :)

Thanks mate, you might have just saved my story!

Amazing :)

Hey thanks for writing this! I'm doing my first lemod RP witha friend and this gave me good insight to what I should plan on my half of the responses! I'll keep these things in mond! Thank you!

Thanks for the tips :) I've read a few and I've been debating whether or not to write one... I've decided to and this gave me some helpful tips (now it won't suck)

Well, yeah the detailing does get a little awkward. I'll keep what you said in mind, thanks for the advice. XD

Thnaks you ! I will need this for one of my stories! Please, go see mines!

Wow, this is awesome! Thx for sharing this valuable info!

:) Very helpful and well written, thanks.
I just try to write some ecchie parts for my newest FF (so not really lemon) and I soon figured that I suck in it xD So I'm really happy I found your tutorial, I'll also read some of your other texts.

This is certainly handy for me, and will be much later. Thanks!

Thank you so much! I'll keep everything you said in mind. :)

This is really good. I'll keep all of these in mind when I write lemon.

I just want to say thank you for writing this. Half was really funny and the other was just so true. Your tips are great (for writing in general as well). I especially love your "manhood" and various names bit. It's so overused it's just plain frustrating. Anyway, very well written and well said :)

Loved it :) I've read one of those where it didn't fit the characters. T.T Ruined the sweetness of the story.

good points and well said.