This has such a nice flow. A lovely calm, gentle poem.
You tell the reader about The Goddess and also introduce them into your beliefs in a non-pushy kind of way.
Really good! Keep it up! :)

Wow, this is amazing! You've described the Goddess wonderfully and you've even made it rhyme! I'm truly in awe, this is beautiful. I'm so glad to have read this poem.
Blessed Be,
Ryanne Moonit

Wow! I can't believe someone wrote a beautiful poem like this! The gods themselves have truely given you a great talent. This poem flowed amazingly well and had a great beat. I just loved reading this piece!
I can only hope you write more soon! :)

This poem is so beautiful! I'm a Christian, but I can't help admiring your work! Keep it up! _

This is an especially good poem about the Lady. I really like it, and hope that you continue your writing:)

Hi, Aesc here.
This is interesting. I didn't know that people still worshipped the Lady- thought it was a dead religion. Plz don't be offended or anything, it's not meant that way.

Beautiful! one of the best pieces about the Goddess i have ever read!

Wow this is just wow! i love it so much! its really inspiring! Keep writing! if u want check out some of my works too.

good write... interesting subject. the rhyme scheme is effective
check my stuff out if you've got the time
iNzaNiTi*