This is a bit interesting . . . CONTINUE PLEASE!

hahaha! i loved the bit where zak was chucking stuff at tonia! that made me laugh so hard i nearly fell out of my chair!
hm...things are really moving fast now are they? i'll be waiting for future chapters...

hahahahahahahahaha!
i liked the bit where tonia said oh yea, villains take saturdays off...
but i thought guradian angels were supposed to be unseen? and remain unseen? but the wings were original. that's the first story i read with a guardian angel with her wings showing. how old is tonia by the way?
zak sounds creepy. for some reason, guys with red eyes sounds scary...
looks like things are gonna get intresting...

Hey : )
Like the story and definitely wanna read more so please update soon!
keep writing,
lv JoeyStar x