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Reviews For: The Victim's Ball

yaoi kitsune
2007-10-22
ch 1,
Love it! It's so sad but at the same time captivating. Hope you plan to continue it.
Reignbowed
2006-01-14
ch 1,
Ugh. Now you've gotten me captivated as well. D: I can't wait for more!
The Neko Chica
2003-12-23
ch 1,
nice. as always, m'dear. . . *small grin* you do so love the name jacqueline. is she the same "heiress?" mm. . . I LOVE the name Clarion. . .
I like it. It's more descriptive than I'm used to, but that makes it better- definitely you. I like that. . the "Victim's Ball". . . I wanna know more about his unnamed beloved. and this supposed atrocity. hmm.. but maybe you should finish NLB first. lol, you're close anyway! *huggles Dmitri* come on come on come on!
. .you have some great one-liners. ". . .the king himself kissed my forehead with his large, fish like lips. . ." that's up there with "go ** a leper."
ddz008
2003-12-18
ch 1,
GREAT!!
I like it, I hope you keep writing... because it seems pretty interesting for me!
Please, keep writing!
:D
Ms. Nobody
2003-12-18
ch 1,
Wow. That was amazing. I guess I sould offer suggestions on how to make it better, but I really can't think of anything to criticize. It was wonderful. Please write more.
Grath Longflech
2003-12-18
ch 1,
hey!
This is great. Absolutely amazing. A bit confusing, though i'm sure everything will be clarified in chapters to come. Keep going! I command you! Muahaha...
love forever,
Grath
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