|Reviews for A4 Fantasy Adventure|
| Puff2978 7/10/04 . chapter 4
very funny! _
| Puff2978 6/8/04 . chapter 3
Interesting. Techno Baron is funny though. _ I like it alot. However, you have some errors like typos here and there in the chapter. I'm sure it's okay though. It's nothing you can't fix. Oh, yeah, I have a little question. . .How did Grimes know that his girlfriend got kidnapped? You didn't mention who told him or anything. Well, I really hope you would continue this soon. This is getting really interesing so far! Please come and read some of my stories if you want. Thanks!
| Puff2978 5/13/04 . chapter 2
a lot of dialogue. but what can i say from a scripted story form? it was very enjoying reading this. continue!