Hey,
Good poem...if I may ask. May I use this poem for a story I have in the developing processes...I would give you credit for it as Keridwen the Foreseer or something to that effect for it is a Fantasy story. If not, ok, no harm in asking.
HtW

OMG! That was awsome! I loved it, absolutely loved it!
Keep writing, your very,very good.

It reminds me of the undead army in Lord of the Rings. So discriptive for a poem!

It makes me picture a scene out of Army of Darkness. Well as a big fan of the undead. This poem does them justice.