I loved this! Shaun is so sweet and VERY persuasive. ^_^ He's adorable.

This story was amazing! There is such talent here! You are an amazing author who shares such a wonderful gift with the world! Never let anyone tell you any differently! Keep writing!

I'll never stop loving Shaun and Fonzo, or your stories.. *swoons*

Hey again! I loved this (surprise, surprise), Shawn is just so cool... Hehehehe. And Fonzo is definately to 'correct' for his own good. Go them, and you!

That was funny, when he reveals to Fonzo what he actually wants. really really funny. i could just picture the look on his face when he told him that.

I like. ^_^ This's very good and nicely written. Well done.

i think he was straight all along

AW! And you only have one review on this?? I can't believe it!
You are a great author! I love your writing style! This chapter is too sweet for words! Great job!

FABULOUS!
I loved it. How could I not? I don't even know what to say...
It was actually quite different to what I thought it would be like. Shaun was so in control and seductive. I thought Shaun's use of "clone logic" was excellent. He goes after Fonzo like he does everything... it's so systematic and leaving no room for loosing... Fonzo didn't stand a chance.
*salivates* And he's quite the little strapping lad. One of the things that surprised me was that I always see Shaun as being so shy and young (like he was in MR) that it took me by surprise that he was so IN CHARGE.
Fonzo is a big loveable oaf. He's trying to be so responsible and all that... as soon as I'd finished reading I went back to the last chapter of MR to see his freak-out again. Shaun and he are great together. So different, yet perfect for each other.
//"You were right," he whispered. "You are enormous."// - *cackles* See! Shaun is so lucky and yet UNlucky.
//Shaun let out a little laughter. "Oh, I will Fonzo, later," he murmured.// -he's a firecracker.
Those are my two favorite moments.
You did a brilliant job with it. Well done. And I'm so pleased to finally read it after all this time.
x. Dean .x