I love this poem, and I can relate to it as Adri is one of my best friens too, and it completely captures the way I feel about her!
P.S. The adding of ''I'm so tired of being here...'' was genius!

hey... thank u so much, mia. this is awesome, i luv it so much... really, i don't think u could have made me a better present, it's just perfect. listen, there's nothing i can say right now, except that it's really brilliant, and that i hope that u'll like my present as well. by the way, i didn't get ur mail yesterday.
I'm happy 2 b ur friend! never leave me!
luv,
Alba

Hey, you greeted us with Elvish! Elen síla lúmenn' omentielvo
Beautiful work, a really heartfelt poem. I love the first stanza, there was a serene feeling when I read the words. 'Our friendship was born, by the will of the earth.' Wonderful line, makes it more powerful.
Again, beautiful work. Anyone would be happy to receive a gift like this.

This is really good. For some reason, I think the lines:
A world of splendor and horror, that makes you fly or crawl,
On the wild journey that takes to a place above death or birth.
Are really good. Also, I did remove some of my works. Two of three of them. I just didn't like them. Oh, well. Anyways, very good job. I hope she likes this, too.
Cirien Phoenix

i would be extremely surprised if she didn't like it. she'd have to be crazy wiht a big fat italicized 'd'! loong story but me and that guy that i was going to winter formal started going out last tuesday! exciting, well i'm off.. absolutely amazing though!
YAY!
Kim

...
*lips start quivering"
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*eyes start to well*
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*proceeds to cry for a few days*
...
that was beautiful, just the meaning and the thought behind it was altogether touching. i am positive, that even though this is a breath taking poem, your friend will love it just because of the love and thought behind it - the greatness, being the bonus :D
"To last forever in this place where mortals sin and angels fall down."
my favourite line, so revealing, so true, so touching within the context.
kudos chica, i know she will love.

OH MY GOD! im acutally BLOWN away! i love this SO much1 SO beautiful! your friend must be amazing. and shes lucky to have a friend like you. this SO breathtaking and heartfelt! fabulous mia. i htink its your best yet!
Birdy

It does seem like you rushed the ending a little bit...but wonderful job. ; I went 'o.O' when I read the Evanscence song lyric...but then I realized the only thing that was missing was quotation markings. ; Sorry to be so nitpicky, mesa'll stop now.
Your friend'll be *sure* to love it, it definitely gets the point across as to how close the both of you are. Awesome job.

If your friend doesn't like this then there is something horribly wrong with her. It's great, really.
I'm tring to write a poem for my friend, too, but I'm kinda stuck. I'll finish it eventually, I hope.
Keep writing.
FxC
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