This one is also too good! Kayla! you got me crying! Yes lately I've been very emotional. -hugsyou- I hate to think of you unhappy and I really hope this poem wasn't written out of past expiriences that you didn't, for some reason, tell me about.

Wow...this sounds more like the gushy romance stuff than the sweet and sarcasm mixture to me, but it's really good writing. I really really really really like this poem. This poem is a bit dark and a little depressing, but it makes people look at their lives in a different perspective. This is the kind of writing that changes the way people think about things. Like I said before, keep writing poems. You could be the next Robert Frost...except less confusing. Your writing is easier to understand, and I am able to relate to it.
Leigh

aww haha another nice poem

oh, that was real GOOD!

It's late, I'm tired and I'm easily tempted to refer to this poem as "flowly and 'o' " but I'm still coherent enough to know that this is a great and well- written poem. I hope to see more of your stuff soon.

...y harlo thar! it's a me!...anyway...good poem...umm...yeah...i dont know what to say about it...har har...k ill shut up now.._

This is your first posting? It is awesome! I really like it, all of it. A little short, but there is shorter poems on this site, so dont worry! Great job! I hope you keep writing and posting so I can keep reading! Keep it up,
nea