i really LOVE this so far.. i can't wait to read the next chapter.. GREAT JOB!

i love it! usually fictionpress stories are about the "loser" falling in love with the "popular guy." but i love that this one is the "popular girl" becoming the "loser."

Hey, I hope you haven't given up on this story, because I recently found it and am rather enjoying Emily's antics, and those of Charlie, of course. And I know just what you mean when you say he's a person that you 'would like to know.' I've met a few of those...anyway, I'm not going to hold my breath, since it has been a near 4 months since your last update, but I can hope to all hope that you really do have more of Emily's plans in store to share with fictionpress. Until then...
-feeling short of stable

nice. but what about charlie?

Ooh, I really like this story! lol. Jude sounds like a really nice guy, heck, he is!.. Well, I can't wait for the next chapter. So, update soon!!

I think that it's too soon for love... but anyway.
I'm very partial to Charlie, but she seems so superficial for only liking him /that way/ once she found out that he had a nice body.

Hmm... Jude is cool, but I like Charlie better... he's just... well, he's been around longer. And he just sounds more fun. But, Jude def sounds really hot. =)

Wow! He really is cool. I hope he's not something like...gay. I mean, that would really be a blow to her self-esteem. Heh heh. But I'm still partial to Charlie. Cause he's been there for her for so long. He's got these great idiosyncracies (I don't know if that's spelled right) and he's also fit! Heh heh. Can't bypass the fitness. Grr..So anyways. Great chapter though. I like the growth that occurred even here. But you still incorporated some of her old habits. LIke she's a bit rash. Even thinking she's in love with Jude and then wanting to change herself so quickly is rash (not a bad rash, but certainly a spur of the moment decision) Well, that's all for now. Super job!

*claps* Bravo! Bravo! Nicely done. Continue continue before I lose my sanity...if it's not too late O_o

great chapter! isn't hey jude a song? it's sounding familiar and i'm betting it's some really famous song that i'm like... too dumb to remember. lol. this was such a great chapter! i love charlie but jude sounds so... hot. sex-god. sigh. anyways, i would love to leave a nice, long review but i am exhausted. update soon plz!

I like a lot! Charlie sounds so adorable, like a teddy bear! Apparently, I muscular teddy bear... m. Oh, what's GMC stand for? I'm a silly US girl, I dunno any of this Australian lingo. Good work, keep it up!

Ah, so sex god has a little bit of humor in him. I like that...a lot. But I also like Charlie and his kookiness. But it's always wonderful to bring in a third party to mix the cards or however the analogy goes a bit. Heh heh. Wonderful job darling, I do love it so. She has such voice in her words. The whole "kill me now" part was just wonderful and I could feel her embarrassment so much! Heh. So yeah. Great job. But do try to update quicker! (Like I'm ONE to talk. Heh heh)

YAY for sex gods! =P Please update soon! You're killing me here

Yay for an update! And needed on this incredibly rainy day we have here in maryland. Thanks! Great story can't wait for more!

ooh la la! She and Sex god AKA Jude? Now I don't know what's going to happen. Is she gonna end up with Charlie or Jude?! Suspense, suspense. Anyways, I really like this chapter and I hope you update soon, soon, soon!