Pssch what do they mean i can't review again on the same chapter? Anyway, this was a brilliant story. I don't usually like stories with so much violence, but you constructed it so well that i was slightly disappointed to reach an end. =)

Ah nearly finished reading but just needed to point out that 340/2 = 190. Shame that neither of the geniuses pointed it out. hahaha
maybe you meant 280/2=140?

Your story had interesting and well rounded characters. I loved both Carson and Sahara. Violet was a great, especially since she turned out as a 'bad guy'. Viviane however could have used some work. I generally don't like reading about the supporting characters much, especially the annoying ones, but her attitude and personality should have come through more. I get the feeling I was supposed to hate the woman, or at least be thoroughly annoyed with her, but I just didn't pick that up.
Overall all it was a great story, well written, and one I will definitly be adding to my favorites list.
~EmotionsHaveNoBrains

Yay I finally found this story again after about three years! I have to admit that I got back into it because I started watching the TV series "Chuck", and then I was like, hey I remember reading this awesome story way back when and now I want to read it again ...

Anyway, just glad that this is still up and I will enjoy re-reading it!

That was amazing. I enjoyed reading Break! You certainly have a talent for writing. :) Fantastic, and thanks for writing this wonderful story! :D

Ha! I KNEW something was up with violet!! :X

Amazing.

“Like Italians waiting to pounce on a meatball.”

I laughed so hard at that line. Haha.
I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Can't help it. I have to say it! :

Aw..

:O

Aw, that was so sweet.
Haha, what is with Carson and Victoria's Secret models? Hahaha!

Hahaha. Violet and the connecting door. I keep laughing at that part. Awesome.

Genius.

Great ending. I loved the way you described Viviane. Made me dislike her at once. Haha.

Haha. Victoria's Secret model. Hahahah!
I like Mattie. Great chapter.

Fantastic start.
I can honestly say that this chapter reeled me in instantly. I have so many questions.. But I shall continue reading :D