|Reviews for Break|
| Anonymous 5/17/13 . chapter 21
This was amazingly well written with just the right number of plot twists to keep it interesting and a level of suspense that kept me reading. I loved how all the little pieces fit together in the end, the details were important, and the way you slipped in a backstory without pausing the action. I loved it.
| MoonGirl1155 3/11/13 . chapter 2
This story reminds me of "Samantha". Just switched around, the guy would be Saharah and the girl was Carson. God I LOVED reading Samantha. I think it's by Lina Trinch.
| MoonGirl1155 3/11/13 . chapter 1
| Ayine 2/2/13 . chapter 21
Amazing, this is definitely one for my favourites :)
I love Carson! :D
Great job. Maybe some more of this?
| R. Ficst 1/13/13 . chapter 21
heeheehee. Very much enjoyed :)
| HeadOverHeelsInHate 12/12/12 . chapter 20
Blah. I accidentally pressed post before I was finished.
Anyways, this story has a good plot and the characters are cool. It's well written too. Love it!
| HeadOverHeelsInHate 12/12/12 . chapter 21
Oooo! Awesome! I like the
| breakthehabit 6/20/12 . chapter 21
Finito! I'm glad you made it so Carson never beat Sahara. :P Epic story. Only bad part was the Violet part. lol. I really liked how you started the story though. Thanks for sharing! :D
| breakthehabit 6/20/12 . chapter 20
I love that part in the last chapter where you kind of backtracked to the beginning, with the Sahara counting. :P Not sure if you understand what I'm tryna say, but..
| breakthehabit 6/20/12 . chapter 19
Okay dude, you did NOT just write an anti-climatic ending for Violet. I REALLY DON'T LIKE YOU NOW! :O Ahfgasdfsdfas. I'm totally in this story. I feel the hate. o_O THAT WASN'T FAIR!
| breakthehabit 6/20/12 . chapter 17
OMG. I can't believe I was right! I suspected Violet. o_O I CAN'T BELIEVE IT.
| goingsogagaoveryou 6/2/12 . chapter 21
Loooooove it! Thanks for sharing! Ahhhh love It! 3
| Cupid'sPsyche 10/26/11 . chapter 20
I swear that from this very moment on, this is my favourite story! For the past one and a half hours you've had me hooked. And a few chapters back when Marvin was twitching every time Violet moved I knew something was up... but i never guessed it was this.
I know this was written a while back so yuur probably a lot better at writing then, but boy was that good.
Bravo for achieving such an intricate, gripping, amazing plot.
When i get access to my real acc. I won't be able to wait to add this story to my favourites. :D
| Ederra 4/28/11 . chapter 21
I absolutely love this!
I basically read the entire thing in one sitting...
The way you wove the romance and action aspects together was brilliant. The plot line was incredible - especially the twists (i.e. the whole Violet thing), and the characters were definitely unique.
So I realise that Break II is probably not happening... unfortunately :(
But nevertheless, this was an amazing story.
| asiaalicexx 11/6/10 . chapter 21
although im about six years late reviewing this story might as well tell you that i loved, loved, loved this story!