| Reviews for Break |
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Anonymous 5/17/13 . chapter 21 This was amazingly well written with just the right number of plot twists to keep it interesting and a level of suspense that kept me reading. I loved how all the little pieces fit together in the end, the details were important, and the way you slipped in a backstory without pausing the action. I loved it. |
MoonGirl1155 3/11/13 . chapter 2This story reminds me of "Samantha". Just switched around, the guy would be Saharah and the girl was Carson. God I LOVED reading Samantha. I think it's by Lina Trinch. |
MoonGirl1155 3/11/13 . chapter 1Interesting... |
Ayine 2/2/13 . chapter 21Amazing, this is definitely one for my favourites :) I love Carson! :D Great job. Maybe some more of this? |
R. Ficst 1/13/13 . chapter 21heeheehee. Very much enjoyed :) |
HeadOverHeelsInHate 12/12/12 . chapter 20Blah. I accidentally pressed post before I was finished. Anyways, this story has a good plot and the characters are cool. It's well written too. Love it! |
HeadOverHeelsInHate 12/12/12 . chapter 21Oooo! Awesome! I like the |
breakthehabit 6/20/12 . chapter 21Finito! I'm glad you made it so Carson never beat Sahara. :P Epic story. Only bad part was the Violet part. lol. I really liked how you started the story though. Thanks for sharing! :D |
breakthehabit 6/20/12 . chapter 20I love that part in the last chapter where you kind of backtracked to the beginning, with the Sahara counting. :P Not sure if you understand what I'm tryna say, but.. |
breakthehabit 6/20/12 . chapter 19Okay dude, you did NOT just write an anti-climatic ending for Violet. I REALLY DON'T LIKE YOU NOW! :O Ahfgasdfsdfas. I'm totally in this story. I feel the hate. o_O THAT WASN'T FAIR! |
breakthehabit 6/20/12 . chapter 17OMG. I can't believe I was right! I suspected Violet. o_O I CAN'T BELIEVE IT. |
goingsogagaoveryou 6/2/12 . chapter 21Loooooove it! Thanks for sharing! Ahhhh love It! 3 |
Cupid'sPsyche 10/26/11 . chapter 20 I swear that from this very moment on, this is my favourite story! For the past one and a half hours you've had me hooked. And a few chapters back when Marvin was twitching every time Violet moved I knew something was up... but i never guessed it was this. I know this was written a while back so yuur probably a lot better at writing then, but boy was that good. Bravo for achieving such an intricate, gripping, amazing plot. When i get access to my real acc. I won't be able to wait to add this story to my favourites. :D |
Ederra 4/28/11 . chapter 21I absolutely love this! I basically read the entire thing in one sitting... The way you wove the romance and action aspects together was brilliant. The plot line was incredible - especially the twists (i.e. the whole Violet thing), and the characters were definitely unique. So I realise that Break II is probably not happening... unfortunately :( But nevertheless, this was an amazing story. -Innocence |
asiaalicexx 11/6/10 . chapter 21although im about six years late reviewing this story might as well tell you that i loved, loved, loved this story! |