Okay, so I'm a cheerleader and I read it anyway. Since I was forewarned not to, I'm not going to bother saying anything about your ideas. I do have one question, though: are you SURE OtakuSailorV proofread it? The words may have been spelled correctly, but there were words that are pronounced the same but have different meanings and spellings (can't remember what they're called right now) that were being used the wrong way, and the format is atrocious. I mean, even if the ideas were excellent and I hated cheerleaders as much as you profess to, this would be really difficult to understand and enjoy.

Christina

For the information of any small minded people who think cheerleaders are prissy **, Cheerleading is a real sport.
Can you do the spilts? Lift someone your own weight above your head? do 100 V-sits?
I didnt think so.
For those of you who still decide to write about cheerleaders in that demeaning way think about this.
Do you now how much strength, practice, balance, flexibility and commitment it takes to be a cheerleader? My best friend is a national cheerleader. She does 20 hours of cheerleading practice a week, as well as practice at home. Do you know how much commitment that takes?
Also cheerleaders, like netballers have to cut the nails short so that noone gets hurt. A cheerleader on my old team wasnt allowed to compete at states because she wears acrylics. So no broken nails, sorry.
You'll probably just laugh this off and think i am stupid for writing this comment. But if you do thats ignorance.
If you think im wrong add my msn, i dont mind proving my point.

HA, this was cute, and I am a cheerleader. Anyway, I am not offended because I realize this is humor and all. I think the cheerleaders should have started dancing w/ Michael before he died.

Hey Ive already reviewed this story, but Just wanted 2 tell u again its really funny!! LOL! I re-read it a lot and laugh my butt off every time!
Ive got this new story called The Field Trip We Turned Wacko. Could u please read it and tell me if u think its funny? Thanks!

LOL!! We read ch 3! It was halarious! We liked the Micheal Jackson joke. lol. white, plastic and a threat 2 children. LOL!!

You should write more to this. or at least a sequel or prequel. But VERY Funny.

FUNY!
WRITE MORE!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
SO fUNNY!
WRITE MORE!

Well that was utterly mind-numbing idiocy with no point. Congratulations on a horrible piece of work. I hope you're proud. (GAG)

Old malanos Sisters here!! HAHAHAHAHA!! That story was so halarious! I loved that u named it after the star wars movies!! And when eye of the tiger started playing!! That was so funny! LOL LOL!!Please read our story and tell us if you think its funny 2!!

lol, I'm not a cheerleader, but I tried out. I didnt make it obviously, but I know a cheerleader whose pretty nice. But she's a senior and we had a discussion about what ** most cheerleaders are because to qoute her, "They think their the **, and then when they realize that they arent and they get some decency." She's pretty cool, and no offense, but the plot was kinda...mreh. The whole tree thing threw me. But besides that, it was funny, I liked the part right after they fell when they were complaining and I liked the part with the random screamer. lol Good job, overall.

It's ur sis here! I'm reviewing because I'm bored at the moment. Thanks to all the reivewers! even that mean dude! ^_^ See ya'll later!

I thought that it was splendid. I don't understand why the other person who reviewed was so cynical. I think that some people are jsut morons who have no sense of humor. You read this in the humor section, now laugh at it. Damn smart asses who think that they're better than everyone. You should know, though, those are the dumb asses who never have any excitment in their god damned lives. you should keep writing this, and it would be easier to read if you spaced more.

If you're going to make fun of cheerleaders, at least write like you're smarter than they supposedly are. OtakuSailorV - if you're spell and grammar checking, what document would that be? Not this one, apparently. If Grandmasta is going to get angry because someone is fixing some of his many mistakes, then perhaps he'd be better off not posting anymore of this until he learns to do it on his own. And Grandmasta, an exclamation like "Cheerleaders suck" is far more effective if you use the plural form rather than the singular possessive. Use paragraphs, spaces after periods, watch apostrophe use, and for god's sake don't use & - write "and," it's only three letters.