Great analogy. I love the style of this, very tight and poignant.

Umm... does this mean you need to know your limitations? pretty deep but understandable. nice poem!

I get the impression with this poem that if you try to be better then what you are, you'll fail. Vaguely unsettling, but well written. Well done.

i read your bio... sort of... it was too long! T-T but i find you very interesting... (no wonder you were in kaze-chan's fave list...) you're good at this stuff. n_n

hmm... makes me wonder how burnt out i'll be one of these days. i love the colors you use, and how vividly you painted this one. lovely work.

Hi! I've just come to say that I love all you're poetry work! They are fantastic and you are very, very talented. I'm actually a registered author in fanfict.net but I have also written millions of poetry and sadly never get a chance to upload them on here *sigh*. Also, you're work has inspired me, and don't worry about the flames...I know what you mean. Just keep up you're good work, and others can't get the fact that people in this world are different to them. Keep me updated when you're next poem is up :D

Cool, not like your other's but I still like it. Thanks for the reviews.
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At the risk of sounding utterly idiotic, I'm going to try and interpret what this meant to me, though I'm sure your countless other readers have their own ideas.
I saw this as people's ambitions, spreading forth, longing to be seen, to have a purpose. I suppose you could put people like celebrities who end up pushing so hard to be recognized, to be accepted, that in the end, it snuffs that flame. A good example of this would be Cobain, as one of your articulate reviewers noticed (thought there's obviously a lot of controversy on how he actually died). Amazing. Just amazing.

Far too true, but lovely in its almost vague bluntness.

You're absolutely right about this...some people do try a little too hard. Excellent job.

~ That was sensible. This is really great and inspiring. Love it...
c. butterfly~**

your poems are really moving
~ Anna ~

Gorgeous. You always leave me in awe, no matter how short or long your poems are.

Wow

Great poem. Very deep and meaningful, with wonderful imagery and symbolism.
*cosmo-queen*