Beautifully put together. It really drew me in and HELD me. You have a great way with words.

Meg (aiRo25)

i can relate to this as well. thanks for sharing and keep writing!

p.s. God loves you and so do I!

Good topic line on there. Thyat was really cool.

Now THIS... is a wonderful view of what religion and belief is all about!

Nice poetry. Your poems are proof that you can have great poetry and still talk about God.

*grins* perfect. absolutely wonderful... you continue to amaze.

Wow. Amazingly done; wonderful work. I know exactly what you mean. The deamons working to pull you under, our only safe-place is in His arms. Kudos, keep it up.

Very strong and facinating.

WOW in capital letters. this is my new favorite.

For some reason it was hard for me to find you on this site. weird. I needed this t is exactly where i am right now. I found alot to inspire me and help me. Thank you. If you get a chance tell me what you thik of my poems. I know i could use a lot of im provements.

It seems that this time faith has not only collided with fear; [in you and many others]... faith seems to have run the blasted thing over. And mayhap will continue to do so this lifetime?

Excenlent! That's all I can say! Great job again! God Bless.
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This perfectly (and I really do mean perfectly) describes the fight that I am convinced that EVERY Christian must fight at some point.
Whether or not we want to admit it, we all drift away from Him at some point. That fear of... something unknown pulls us away, and yet you don't know why you're drifting. I mean, this poem speaks to me over and over and over again. The italicized lines made this a very intense, powerful, and poignant piece. EXCELLENT WORK, Heart.

Love how you incorporate thoughts in italics between the lines of the poem. It feels like reading someone's mind in there. Keep writing!

Once again, you pull it all through. Your words inspire me.
~ Yabou ~ SL