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AngelLLY1 2003-12-22 . chapter 1
Very good. Captures a good feeling of helplessness.
the part
" someone to care...someone to fill
my cold and broken heart"
Either is a very good combination of words or a very bad one, i cant decide.
More of it should ryme, the syllables dont match.
BUT I LOVE THE WORDS,LOVE UM TO DEATH.
William Ironclad 2003-12-20 . chapter 1
Ah! So sad! Be strong.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
Rocky G 2003-12-20 . chapter 1
A great poem, if it is about your true feelings then I hope you do find your happiness.
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