 AngelLLY1 2003-12-22 . chapter 1Very good. Captures a good feeling of helplessness.
the part
" someone to care...someone to fill
my cold and broken heart"
Either is a very good combination of words or a very bad one, i cant decide.
More of it should ryme, the syllables dont match.
BUT I LOVE THE WORDS,LOVE UM TO DEATH. |