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| cosmo-queen 2004-01-05 ch 1, | abuseA complex and meaningful piece. Very well-written, with thought-provoking imagery. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Lidless Eye 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was awesome... the rhyming scheme was great. The imagery was also really good... Keep it up! ~Lidless Eye |
| glitterjewele 2003-12-28 ch 1, | abuseyes indeed, this is one of your more complex pieces, but it's very enjoyable nonetheless. one of the things i like most about it is the fast-paced rhythm and loose rhyme ~ it reads just like a whole bunch of thought processess compounding on each other. my favorite stanza was the second one: exhibition, inhibition lose your soul in deep perversion to catch a thief, to catch a man come and find me, if you can it reads *perfectly* and i think the message comes out clearest in that segment. really good piece, i like it a lot. and welcome back. :) |
| The Black Rider 2003-12-23 ch 1, | abuseI'm really sorry I didn't read this sooner; it is excellent. My grandfather was ALWAYS the man you described. He'd purposely get smashed so he could be the last to leave. Strange man, my grandfather. Great job as always, and have a very Merry Christmas. |
| Somebody's Anyone 2003-12-19 ch 1, | abuse...that's really good...it makes a startling amount of sense to me...really good, insanely eloquent, vividly descriptive...nice |