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cosmo-queen
2004-01-05
ch 1,
abuseA complex and meaningful piece. Very well-written, with thought-provoking imagery. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
Lidless Eye
2004-01-03
ch 1,
abuseThis was awesome... the rhyming scheme was great. The imagery was also really good... Keep it up!
~Lidless Eye
glitterjewele
2003-12-28
ch 1,
abuseyes indeed, this is one of your more complex pieces, but it's very enjoyable nonetheless. one of the things i like most about it is the fast-paced rhythm and loose rhyme ~ it reads just like a whole bunch of thought processess compounding on each other. my favorite stanza was the second one:

exhibition, inhibition
lose your soul in deep perversion
to catch a thief, to catch a man
come and find me, if you can

it reads *perfectly* and i think the message comes out clearest in that segment.

really good piece, i like it a lot. and welcome back. :)
The Black Rider
2003-12-23
ch 1,
abuseI'm really sorry I didn't read this sooner; it is excellent. My grandfather was ALWAYS the man you described. He'd purposely get smashed so he could be the last to leave. Strange man, my grandfather. Great job as always, and have a very Merry Christmas.
Somebody's Anyone
2003-12-19
ch 1,
abuse...that's really good...it makes a startling amount of sense to me...really good, insanely eloquent, vividly descriptive...nice
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