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| Grace 2004-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful...breath atking even...o.k. I'm being slightly dramatic but it was wonderful...;-) |
| Grace 2004-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful...breath atking even...o.k. I'm being slightly dramatic but it was wonderful...;-) |
| Songs of sorrow 2003-12-30 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. Not that your feeling all down, i meant nicely written. The lines 'every breath i take, every move i make' made me think a 'The police' song that had those 2 lines. I probably shouldnt have laughed but it was a comical image. Keep up the good writing, and pay no attention of my senseless babbling. S.O.S x |
| Ponytail Goddess 2003-12-20 ch 1, | abuseVery sad, but nicely done. -P.G. |
| Sarah Parker 2003-12-19 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is so sweet... in a very, very sad way... it's a beautiful poem. Really touching.. and emotional. Very well done on it. I can completely relate. |