deep. in more ways than one. scary too. is it true. hope not. good style. i liked it.

nice job

I think I am way off, but I got the idea of somebody lusting over someone who is going to do nothing but hurt them. can you e-mail me and tell me what you meant

Ah .. I relate to this one ... excellent imagery.

OOh, how deliciously sadomasochistic. Me likes.
Hrm, now I'm all blood-lusty...ah well. Nice poem. ^^'