I love the end to this poem, but the second half seems very detatched from the first; it takes a completely different turn. None the less, the imagery and words behind this poem were really pretty and fading and nice. Write more poetry like this one!

Sounds like a really depressed girl who needs to open up to her parent(s) and let them help. I know one of them is definitely willing to help, if only she would ask.
Love you Jenna

amazing..this poem sent chills down my spine. a lot of teens can relate to this poem, myself included. kudos to you for exposing the type of life that so many teens are living today, but are too scared to admit it. BRAVO!
* - s