please please update!

eh..sry. but you put the chapter twice in the middle... otherwise i like it!

wow, what an interesting story. Not like other vampire stories. Great job on a few grammar problems here and there, but of course we all are humans, we can't be perfect in everything we do.

Keep up the awesome job :)

Your writting has improved immensly since "To love a Vampire". There are hardly any spelling mistake's and the POV's do not change so quickly and dramatically. From the look of this story compared to the first I would have to say that your writting wil only get better. When are you going to update this story? It has been quite some time since you have updated and I think that you should get a hurry along. :) Jaquinta

I just don't understand what just happened. Did someone have like a preminition? This was written pretty strangley but straight foward aswell. It kinnda seemed as though it was acdicentally repeated so I'm hoping that it was a preminition and then the real thing? Oh golly gosh! I am totally confusing myself! Argh!

I read your first story. It turned out to be really quite good and cute. I am interested to see what will happen in this story.

UPDATE THE DARN STORY!

UPDATE THE STORY!prettypretty pretty please!)

ur story is good so far..i dont think u should let anyone else die though. I think that Jhess' father should have a change of heart or that Nathaniel should either kill him or dishonor him or something to that soon!

good story, i just read this and the prequel, well done, keep up thegoodwork, i hope they get Michael outsoon

I like this so far...can't wait for more!

I really like your story... Poor Michael he's in trouble and doesn't even know it...

I really love this story! I like it and even though I hate her father I see the reason for him. Can't wait for more! Oh yea, I hope the child lives!

Dude! You suck! I can't believe you! I'm not sure wether or not i'm going to read the rest of this story. I don't like this chapter. It's supposed to be happy! (

i have just read to love a vamp and now this one and i have injoyed both