wow this is touching in a way.

hmm... i must ponder this. the poem is wonderful, but i'm trying to find exactly what is behind your words. again, awesome.

-twitches- This is good, really good! The poem just seems to send a chill down my spine as I read it. I hope that one day you'll get all these amazing poems you wrote published one day!

Amazing. I like how the words flow together so seemlessly. Very well written.

Powerful...just Powerful

Nice this is going on my favorites list!

Originality is what make your poem so pleasing to read.

Cool poem. Maybe sometime could you check out mine?? God bless!
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Nice use of rich imagery and wording running throughout this poem. To be honest, it's something that you often use, but don't take that as a negative comment. I use a lot of the same words in a lot of my poetry. The difference between you and me is that you are fresh and original, and I am... well, not so fresh and original. ;)
The geography words were very nicely done, as no one really uses them. A lot of nature wording came through this as well. Another great poem!

I like the message expressed in this piece, and just the title of it makes me feel warm, but chilled at the same time. Awesome work.

I just love your concepts, they're always so original... Brilliant, I love your word choice. I loved the line 'An equator that blends both colors and gray shades'. I got a real flash of imagery from that one.

Wow, this piece is just...intense. I like the idea, the whole concept of it, and the way you just transform everything into such amazing words. That was simple awesome.

I always have to work to understand your poems, ehich is good, because the language used is amazing...

Wow, what a wonderful job! NICE POEM!

Amazing work... great concept once again.
~Lidless Eye