this was excellent I love how you write! you are a very talented writer by far!!

The imagery in this is really amazing. I love how you can use the words to give an impact just as dramatic as rhymes, maybe more. I liked the last verse best...reminds me of all the colors I saw when I looked into my sister's eyes one day. Do keep writing!

The last stanza is especially brilliant, but the entire poem is truly inspired. You have been blessed with an amazing amout of talent.

Facinating.

REALLY GOOD! Ths is so... beautiful:D Write more:)

Wow once again you have outdone yourself
what an interesting way to think obout the pupil.

wow, i love it! that last line is particularily striking! man, you blow me from my feet. the imagry is really lovely.

Wow, you have done it again! Something that none of us could have thought off or even realised the importance of it, you go girl!

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Never thought that saying could be used literally.
This gives me a much more refreshing perspective on the human eye. Erm.. give me a couple years and I'll figure out the last two lines. ^_^ They're beyond my thinking as of now.

Wow, I really like this poem, I never thought about the pupil of the eye before, just the eye that's really wicked. I especially like the lines "Emotions riding on dark winded storms" And I'm very glad you're a Christian! Yay!!

Wow, this is really artistic. It's very interesting. I never thought of a pupil this way. It's original, very good.

Your reviewer 'Kenshin' certainly is articulate, huh? Don't listen to such hypocrisy, seeing as they reviewed anonymously. What does that say to you? Hmm... ;)
Without the title, I'm sure I never would have guessed this as personification as an eye/pupil. I know I've told you this befoer, but your descriptive poetry is just marvelous. You should honestly try and get a book sometime with all your poems in them, for a keepsake. :) Great work.

Simply amazing. How do you do it, really?

Now this is something I'd have never thought of writing about. Excellent, awesome, work.

Great work. Your wording is exellent.