|Reviews for The Clan|
| deri 4/12/05 . chapter 1
You know I always Supporting you... keep up the good work...All the best...May The Force Be With You...
| Forsakn 9/7/04 . chapter 1
You have a lot of missing words. o_O For instance, "So what do you about the Professor?" asked Deri .. Lots more. Read through once and try to pick out the missing bits. You also have words in funny places. o_O
| Merit Somnia 7/30/04 . chapter 1
Interesting and realistic.