wow sweet i loved the story

*poketh* you NEED to update! Oh, and I want to see more Kym/Jimmie paired scenes! ^^

Ha! This story is pretty good, though I must say that you must have some pretty bad witnesses where you live... -_-' I would go crazy spending too much time with the sisters, ALL of my meeting clothes are black, my school clothes are just plain weird in their random mix of skater punk goth and somehow hippie, and I write greek myths and vampire stories... I think I'll stick to my nice 'lil socal congegation thankyouverymuch ^^' your local one seems scary... Oh well! keep up the good work on your stuff

Ok...so you wrote these a long time ago whatever..I really really need the end of this story...please!

amazing...! UPDATE NOW PLEASE! I need this!

One question...not that I have a problem with this...but is everyone homosexual?

Listen, megan, I appreciate your constructive criticism of my other, NEWER stories, but this one is old and I haven't updated it in quite a while. I started it when I was 14 for god's sake. I KNOW it sucks -- The only reason I keep it up is for reference because I'm completely rewriting it. Thanks for the thought, but you don't need to bother yourself telling me what a piece of crap THIS is.

Also, as you did seem to have some questions about my other stories, if you'd kindly leave your email address in your reviews, I'll be more than happy to answer them.

~Sasori Kym

I think its all to fantastic and glorifying for them all to be rich and all to live in mansions it cheapens your story...I know it makes things easier on you and it gives you more freedom to create these amazing scenarios but the wealth combined with the rest of the fiction is a little much. Also no one is aas big a ** as Leon...You don't invite people to yout house and let them crap all over you, no matter whose "sign" is weaker or stronger.

Why do Virgo and Capircorn have the same power? That doesn't make sense at all. The Zodiac signs all posess distinct and unique characteristics that account for their individuality. If they had the same powers and persona, why would they have different names?

The manner in which you attempt to disproove the belief system of the Jehovah's Witnesses is not believable in the least and hardly convince the weakest of followers to give up their faith let alone a youthful devotee conversing with nuns of the order...you should do a little more research on doctrine and set up a basic belief system that your story can agree with, because it all depends on the "right way" in the story you've created, once you've established what you believer, then you can begin to pick apart what others have chosen to follow.

Coolness, definitely going to my favorites.

Ultraviolet light! Very creative and interesting, not to mention fun.I like how Akia's developing... Leon seemed different, though. Not quite so simple/sweetly loveable. Too normal.
I loved how you wrote the dream-vision piece last chap, and how you mixed Kym's actual memories with her happy-okeydokey-version. Very smooth and insightful.

Great story so far! The character descriptions are excellent! I hope you add many more chapters and even another few stories! Awesome way to unfold plot and story-I'm so hooked!!

Way to go, nice one. Liked the UV idea ;) And it wasn't THAT short...

Hello Kymi-san!
Hello everyone else! I am Jimmie... yup thats right Jimmie from, "Sasori Senshi of the Zodiac"! I just wanted to say that this story is bye freaking FAR the BEST story that I have EVER read... plus I get to read all of the chapters in advance... I LOVE being special! Kyms my girlfriend you all know? Well I'll leave you all now... but first, visit my So Weird site, eh? http://w.geocities.com/redbot13/SoWeirdUnlimited.html
Hugs! Jimmie!