Hey, this is Alicia.

I like this story. I chose to read this one first because it was the longest.

There are some grammatical errors, though; would you like me to beta a chapter or two for you? I beta'd Erin's story once and she said I had good advice.

Your story idea is interesting, but the characterizations of Sara and Viktor could be developed more. Sara seems too naive to be believed.

I also, like another reviewer said, can't figure out the year. I know this is fantasy (because of the whole magic box thing) but it should still make historical sense if it takes place in this world.

I don't know much about Japan, but I do know that they have currency, so in the beginning where Sara pulls out a five dollar bill and has no idea what it is, wouldn't happen. I think she would already have some idea about American culture, and also, even though she tells Rebecca that she can take care of herself, I see no evidence of independence.

I really like Max. You've written him well. So far he seems like a believable person.

I'm confused about what's going on with the box and fate and stuff. But more chapters will explain that, I'm sure.

I'm gonna go look at your shorter stuff now. Email me, when you can.

Lovin the update! I hope that Victor and Sara will get together soon! I can't wait to see what will happen with Sara's mother! I like the present that she bought for him! I hope Victor gets out of his depressed state or what ever you want to call it soon! Please update soon!
~adders~

Lovely story so far. There are a few gramatical errors, but for the most part it is well written. Please update soon! (the mirror eyes thing is kinda creepy... but incredibly interesting, i simply cant wait to see wat you make of that.)

Aw..I like the story! Im really interested in what happened in the library! Cant' wait for mroe! please udpate soon!
~lovelynebula~

I like this. I hope you update soon =)It's a great story so far. Good work.

Those two chapters are excellent. I could fell the characters, ya know?

Hey! I like ur story so far! It's interesting, so keep up the good work!

So...tired...all I can say is that it was great and please update soon! Yawn...update now! ^__^

well take it easy, no need to freak out. I was sota the same way about my first rape scene, it was like, "eh, how did this come up?' but ah well. This is really good, i hope you update soon.
~mel

Are you kidding? I love this **! I love it! I'm Catholic and all, I believe in sex after marriage but I love these type of scenes! You gotta include some more lemons in your stories, I loved it! Wow, that had to be the best rape scenene ever! For some reason I love rape and then the two really do fall in love with each other. ^__^ Please don't take this long next time, I LOVE this story! Can't wait till they meet!

Now that I think about it, it'd be pretty cool to see our Russian dude pick up Sara off of the streets and start being really cruel to her. But, Sara will change his cold heart! ^__^ Sorry, just trying ta help ya out.

This is a great story, and I really don't care how the rest of it goes, as long as you post more soon!

I like this story. I can't wait to read more and see what happens when the two meet.

Him, a user eh? This should be interesting to see how he and Sara interact with each other. Just two things, can you give us a better description of the two characters? Height weight, skin color, eyes color, hair, hair color, etc? Also, when's this suppose to take place? Well, great story and PLEASE UPDATE SOONIEZ!

This was kinda short, don't cha think? I mean, compared to the 1st one. Oh well, when are we gonna meet this Russian dude. Oh I better just read on and find out, huh?