   Horosha no Kage 2004-01-28 . chapter 7Go Hanako with her awesome skills! Go Nazomi with her stupid-arse accuracy! XD Nica anime-like ending, by the way...hurhur... |
 Sakamura 2004-01-27 . chapter 7Nice story...lol...keep going...i want to see what happens next |
| Horosha no Kage 2004-01-18 . chapter 6 Ah...bravo, Kyo-san... I love the descriptions you've dished out...(Though you could've SPARED me of that bump and grind, gr)... Yes, going back to the point; you got me riled up, lol...especially...=_=
::does the Phoenix Sweep aka UpperStrike attack on Kyo:: SINCE YOU'VE MENTIONED MY STORY! BAKA! ;_; It SUX that I can't even update on it...Argh, how DARE you...
Anyway, I'm done; keep writing. (Yesh, we're still at war...mwahaha) |
 bryansangel8-16-03 2004-01-18 . chapter 6How dare you hurt hanako... just kiddin... lol... I love the fightin scene... anywho, nice job and keep writin |
| Sakamura 2004-01-17 . chapter 6 Kon'nichi wa Kyo...this chapter was awesome...finally got to se into his past a little |
| bryansangel8-16-03 2004-01-07 . chapter 5 I think the story is really good.. and hanako and nazomi kick butt... that's new.. we even beat up the great kyo lol |
| Sakamura 2004-01-06 . chapter 5 i like...added depth...romance...lol |
| Horosha no Kage 2004-01-05 . chapter 4 "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned." Heh, nice 'conflict' you got here...but then again...I'm sure you're going to pull something else, right? |
| Sakamura 2004-01-04 . chapter 4 good story...good characterization...i want to see what happens next! |
 Devabbi 2003-12-31 . chapter 3*applauds* awesome job on fighty scenes... But pwease write more soon. I'll go mad if I never see the end of a story. Keeps me wondering. Then I try to finish it myself, and I do a really crappy job, throw it away and then I'm just back where I started. Annoyed that it isnt done. Gah.So yesh, work on it soon!
~Moron~ (lizi) |
| Sakamura 2003-12-27 . chapter 3 Cool story...keep working on it...i want to see what happens next |
| Horosha no Kage 2003-12-26 . chapter 3 ::imitates a badly dubbed Kung-Fu movie:: I will...defeat you...by making you into origami flower, hwa!! XD Hana-chan kicks major arse, hehheh. Nazomi wasn't bad either... ::stares back at Shinsei na Ryu's blank look:: NANI O? I'm humbling myself! :P
Anywho, yatta! Chapter 2 went shwell...now write more, blast it! |
 Dawn Sky 2003-12-23 . chapter 2This was an excellent start..I hope it only gets better from here ...so please get crackin' on chapter two! |
| Horosha no Kage 2003-12-22 . chapter 2 Bleh...leave me hanging, why don't ya?! Then again, I suppose it is too early to go deeper, ne?
It sux to know that the author is highly capable of writing great works, and you can't wait to lose yourself in one of them. (Ahem, speaking of your other 'great works'...what happened to them?) |
| Horosha no Kage 2003-12-22 . chapter 1 Huh, not surprised by the intro; you always managed to bring my attention whether I like it or not, lol. Anywho, I am sure that this tale will be just as good as the others.
Now onward I go to the actual story, huh-huh. XD |
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