That sounds a lot like Tai and Wren's parents. . . but since you don't know who they are, I'll get to the point now. This was a great poem, and true for a lot of people I know. I am lucky enough to have parents who try very hard not to pressure me. I'll show this to my friends. I know they'll like it. I give you a cookie!
~Lonni

This poem is a perfect expression of a certain sentiment. I can relate...Me and my mom were like that for a while.. but it gets better with time...Love the poem

Great job. Me and my mom fight a lot too. I just like things, do things, say things, she never would do/say. i hide things from her all the time, secrets, things I know will ruin my own life if i tell her. ^_^ GReat job once again, ja.

You know, the weird thing is this sounds a lot like my dad...Maybe I should print this and stick it on my refrigerator as a hint. :p
But really, you put a lot of truth into this poem, and that's probably why it's so good. Continue writing :)
~Exagerration~

I relate to this-- I feel the same way about my mother.
Wow. Nice work.
::WingedAssassin::

I should give htis to my mom. It's exactly what she does to me. It's very annoying. Love the title.
IcyFlames

good. very good, I really like the way you have put it together.

that's really good, but do you really hate her that much? ive got a feeling u don't, u were just fed up. i know the feeling, lol. u r soo awesome, im lovin ur poems!
*lyz

I really dont know what to say to this poem, I really don't. I like it tho! Very well written.
*Talon
PS: I can't find Jack. Sorry. He can't give you a hug this time. I think he ran away with the Pearl...DAMN IT!

wow girl. thats like...really good. but of course it is! you should get these published in a book! ~me~

I love this! I can totally relate, too. Great job!

once again, a masterpiece! i especially love the title! great job girl! keep it up!

One word: woah.
My whole family and I have been having... disagreements lately. Sure I've written some poetry about it but... this is... woah.

I can relate to this poem, parents don't understand. It's a lovely poem, well done! nice choice of wording, where'd you get your inspiration?