Short...but very good.

Thankx so much for the nice reviews. ^_^ I really appreciate it.
Now, onto my own reviews:
Great job. I hide in my basement now too, since, that's where the computer is. There's a fridge right outside to get pop, there's going to be a bathroom as well soon and there's a TV, so I'm quite at home. Though, sometimes locking myself in my room is easier. ^_^ I love this, going on my favs. Ja.

Sounds similar to what I do when I can't face the world anymore. Only my refuge is my bedroom. I like this.

Excellent. A very vivid poem, I can't hide out in my basement; some1's always there *gr* The deserted playground makes the past seem frther away. Good job!
IcyFlames
P.S. I so happy! My parents go me Pirates of the Csarribean for x-mas. now i can just sit and drool over Orlando!!

I like "a deserted playground" it reminds me of my past. I think that you should add some more to it.

wow that's really good, i love it! keep up the poetry gurlie!

How sweet... Barbies... lol

love it! lol...weren't we talking about this the other day? anyways, great job!