A chromatic fantasy. Gorgeous images. m

Spliced haikus are addictive. I liked the second line of the second poem the best.

You have a real talent for imagery...everything's always delicate where it needs to be delicate, and soft where it needs to be soft, and amazing everywhere.

Wow. "whispers of morning
color gives birth to
gossamer wings unfolding"- that was awesome, so pretty and ...ethereal that is the word. Just incredible writing.

Wow, I have never seen a haiku like this one but is is truly beautiful and enchanting. Your word choice gives a mystical atmosphere to this piece of writing, and is so soothing and gentle to read. I especially loved the use of the word 'gossamer', and loved the line, "nimble spirits elapsed in buds". Simply wonderful and divine!

I think faeries are very enchanting. The only issue I have with this is that it isn't a true haiku. A haiku is based on how many syllables are in each line.
5,
7,
5
That's the proper way they are. If you have any other questions just stick it on as a P.S. in the end of a review. K?
~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame

Simply beautiful. Reminds me of a fairie painting my friend did for me for Christmas. If I turn around, I'll see it right above my bookshelf.

Lovely imagery without being stereotypical-and the format is genius!

beautiful. You're very talented with the spliced haikus. Awesome work.

*oh*
*giggle* i have a slight obession with turn of the century fantasy and fairy painting. you totally captured the soul of what i love in those. quiet and sweet and promising and luminescent :)

This is so enchanting. I'm so very pleased! The first haiku is such a pretty personification of dawn. More than pretty, the word "gossamer" is so strong within the context. And the second haiku gives a very accurate feeling of ephemer(ity?). My gosh, you make such dreamy creations! Thank you very much!

*gorgeous*

these spliced haikus are *so* neat, i can't get enough of them! yours especially are very captivating ~ they always work together as well as apart. the scene is lovely and the feeling is divine. if i had to choose, i'd say the unitalicized haiku is slightly more entrancing (key word "slightly"); just the depiction of gossamer wings unfolding amid morning whispers *melts in the loveliness* simply stunning work, kudos chica!

beautiful. left me with wonderful thoughts. i love the format as well!

So magical and brimming with mystique. You truly do have a way with words. I'm sure Frugale will be very pleased.
~Heart of the Sword

You are a fairy for writing such beautiful poems all the time. They're always so simple and yet so gorgeous as well. Never stop writing.

You have such a lovely way with words. The whole poem was graceful and haunting. Faeries. . .*sighs and drifts off into daydream*
-Jessica