Wow, that was awesome! I love how you integrated Mad World into the story, it helps set the tone of the piece (plus, I ** love that song). Very well-written, the sentence fragments make it seem more choppy, more confused, and that definitely strengthens the emotion. Wonderful job.

chochang913

Wow. That left me completely speechless- I can't imagine having to go through somethign like that. When I am down is when I write, though.
~Lee
plz r&r me if ya have time!

...this is so brilliant...
You say it isn't from your P.O.V... I believe you but I see things that are similar to your character in both the P.O.V and the other girl... It's very sad and quite scary towards the end because It's very close to reality.
...I'll ask you more about this next time I see you...
Love ya... Zoe xx

... brilliant, absolutely brilliant...

I consider this a piece of art, frankly.

wow... the end of that actually scared me a little... and very few things do. so congratulations! mad world is actually originally by a band named tears for fears... you probably heard of them... gary jules redid it for donnie darko. hm.. i love that song.