It had alot of emotion and you are a very talented writer. Your writing is very uplifting.

no i don't mind you advertising your work that wasn't how i took it at all. in fact, it was really sweet of you to offer some comfort. this was really a work of the heart and very well done. but i'm gonna spin off in a personal direction here: the only thing is i've heard this all my life. rest assured it's not you this short story was really sweet and i really did like it. but iono ... it's a personal thing for me i feel sometimes i need to shut down and really hit the bottom. sometimes i don't wanna hear this. and i'm sorry for going off on you like that it's totally not you plz PLZ don't take offence i did not mean it at all that was basically me just talking to myself. but thank you for caring
~k8

monica... u continue to astound me with your gift of writing... u almost made me cry with this one! this was actually a boost i needed... no, im not pregnant, lol, but i dont know, life throws you curves sometimes... and its really good to know that there is a God out there that loves you more than anything on this earth that he created. Thank you so much... i am positive this fic will speak to someone... i love u forever!!

This is very good. Honestly. The best thing about it is that you wrote from your heart, and it is clearly evident that you believe and put your trust in every word you placed on the page. Only true writers can do so. Good Job. Write more please.