another good poem. I like your work. A bit straight forward towards the beginning, it has been my experience that straight forward poems lose effect. Though i did like the ending. I was reading it and uploading a chapter to my story at the same time and thinking, wow, that reminds me of a character i use, then i was thinking, wow, that reminds me of someone i know, then i thought... damn i am thinking a bit too much about this. Good job!