clear and vivid imagery. Nice Job!!

Awesome, this is much better than my drabble "Elements"! *claps*
*lime-girl*
Ps, Thanx for the review!

Wow. ::is amused by the questions and the flamers::
This is ridiculously awesome. I've always wanted a list of the elements for each Goddess. And this is much prettier than a list. ::yays::

I've always liked clocks... *looks in mild surprise at the claim to death's element hanging on the wall*
Another interesting and very educational poem. I have to second Goth-girl in asking if this belongs to a specific order, I may want to research this further. Beautiful demonstration of symbolism, nice simile and metaphor as well. *applauds*

yo, i had one more thing to say...but we can only review once per story for some reason. -_-;; newayz: i must apologize for getting directly mad at you b/c i DID say 'flames and views accepted', so it wuz my fault i had to read ur thrashing. tho u probably would have put it in there anyway.
and: your essay: 'Repression, Intolerance, and Blind Hatred'
if u dont want ppl trashin u, then shut ur mouth about us Christians. hey, i may have made one mistake. but i bet if one of ur friends ditched u and ur religion then u would be somewhat sad. right? in any case: i just wanted to say u are being somewhat hypocritical as to say that i cant write about what i feel towards non-christians and u can write WHATEVER you want about christians.
-mKs

Well, I suppose it was pretty good.
Thank for finding time to review only my spiritual poems, but your reviews are no longer wanted by this writer. I will continue to try and pray for you.
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hehe "which cannot help but alter where
it alteration finds". it's a beautiful sonnet.

Fascinating.
I only knew of five elements. Do you invoke Shadow, Life, and Death in your circles? If so, I'll have to learn how to do that. It sounds like a fascinating practice and I'm always interested in new ways do things. Great work:D
I'll have to research more into this.
BTW, does this come from a specific trad or branch of Paganism?

wow, that's amazing. so much detail and description went into this, and it totally captivated me. the imagery is so...vivid...it's like you can sense things from what you right. beautiful

Beautiful phrasing. Excellent way of describing the Ellaran Elements. :) I find it interesting that the element I've always had an affinity for is Time. :)
~Swinging from the chandeliers~