Awesome!! Keep writing!

Hey - I just wanted to tell you I really like this. Especially the names you use... they sound familiar but I'm not sure why... are they Greek? (I'm really not very well educated in names and meanings and stuff like that) I found your stuff because I was searching through the directory for myself (it sounds sad I know but I just wanted to check it was there), and obviously because your name starts the same as mine I saw yours in the list and... I really liked it - mainly because I like vampire myths and things too. They just appeal to me for some reason. (Sorry - I tend to ramble a bit!) Anyway I really enjoyed this and if you update I'll be reading it. I know you said you don't update often but that won't bother me cos... well, I don't either so...

Okay, I only have one problem with this story, why do you chage from first person to third person between chapters? That makes it a little confusing...

Other than that, this story is great, Update soon!

Cool, update soon.

Omg! Keep writng. I so tink thye should get togethr. ^-^

Nice wrok. keepwriting

Cool. Update soon please.

great

Good interesting. You sure took a long time to update such a short chapter, oh well. Good job. Update soon

Write more soon.

Intresting, please continue.
~Midnight Predator~

What happened, it was all written with her talking and now it's like "She got her gun" instead of "I got my gun"? Just had to point that out before I read on. And vampire are souless evil things, I have no idea why anyone would think otherwise...
~Midnight Predaor~

O….keepmwwriting this is really good

Thanx 4 reviewing. This is realyy good. First I have to read all the chaps

to short