This is a beautiful poem! It is so vague, you can't quite grasp the meaning, and the mystery somehow makes it funner to read. It makes you think. Well-done, by the way. Great job.

Wow. I love this poem. The vagueness of it really helps to develop the beautiful images you wirte. You used great word choice, and the poem is just overall beautiful. There is not much I can say. Wow. Keep up the good work!